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Am I still

Let’s see how good my artistic and writing abilities are. Can you tell why she slipped?

ORIGINAL COMMENTS:

Plippy (May 3, 2006, 2:31):
I do believe I’ve discovered one fatal flaw in my writing skillz. [writes note to self: “introduce less new character”] … Unfortunately it’s not gonna get much better… I’ve got a few other characters who’ll be thrown into the mix. But I suppose, again, the confusing nature of all the new characters is just to put you into the role of Avery. I mean he just moved to Moose River, so to him everyone else is pretty new also. 😛 … I’ll figure out a way to consolitate all this stuff. There’s at least a method to my madness.

Alex (May 3, 2006, 1:13):
Someone made a point about the confusing nature of having so many new characters. I think you should add a link to the character page directly at the top. It would help loads! It was the first thing I looked for, and failed to find.

Plippy (May 1, 2006, 10:29):
Actually, I dunno why I didn’t add in the background. I think maybe for dramatic effect?

Timbosister (May 1, 2006, 8:08):
Yeah, but why did the background dissapear in the third panel?

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