20070115:

OK, this is part one of the gigantic Navy rant that I wrote. All of what she says still kinda applies to the main storyline, in that she has that kind of neurosis. But unlike this page, I’m gonna have to show it differently in the main series. I mean, just look at it! Do you even want to read that? I wrote it at first because I thought it would be the perfect window into her mind. When people started to read the original page when I posted it, it certainly did the trick to prove what Navy was like, but not in the right way.

Eventually I’ll throw in some of that dialogue back into the main storyline, but obviously much more streamlined, or at least spread out over like… thirty frames than just five.

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