eXTReMe Tracker
Can't see anything? Click here.
Start reading from the beginning! (Archive)
About the Comic / Current Comic Plans / About the Artist / Character Guide / News Archives / Extra Junk / Links
Social Media Links: instagram / Facebook / Patreon / deviantART

Plus his other friend was dumb and

Alright…. slight change in plans, folks. I’ve removed everything after this point in the story and set them aside for the moment. I began to see that the story was starting to get a little TOO concentrated on Navy, so I’m gonna throw in a whole bunch of extra bits to really really thin out her story. (And by thin out, I mean like, the whole Navy-Yukito bit won’t happen until, like, Chapter 7). I’m also gonna go through some of the last few pages and update the dialogue a bit.

I hate the idea of having to do this, but I’ve resigned myself to the idea that it’ll help the story a lot.


If you want, you can read the pages I had removed from after this point. This is the first page of the set of pages that was originally removed, although it and a few pages after it were reworked into the main story. The rest of the removed pages start here.

Sleep. For next comic, I’m gonna switch over to a new scene.

Leave a Reply

• No account needed to post a comment.
• I love criticism!
• All comments are moderated just so I can combat spam.
• There is a 1% chance your comment might end up in my spam blocker and will be deleted automatically. If that happens, I'm sorry!
Click here to view the Emoticon guide.

Moose River
by Philippe Van Lieu
—Fully Charged - June 27th, 2019—

From the bottom of my heart (and the bottom of this page): thank you very much for reading my comics.

Nick15, all related subjects, and all text are ©1996-2019 Philippe Van Lieu
All else are copyright of their respective owners. Used without permission. Dang.