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Plus his other friend was dumb and

Monday, October 16th, 2006

Alright…. slight change in plans, folks. I’ve removed everything after this point in the story and set them aside for the moment. I began to see that the story was starting to get a little TOO concentrated on Navy, so I’m gonna throw in a whole bunch of extra bits to really really thin out her story. (And by thin out, I mean like, the whole Navy-Yukito bit won’t happen until, like, Chapter 7). I’m also gonna go through some of the last few pages and update the dialogue a bit.

I hate the idea of having to do this, but I’ve resigned myself to the idea that it’ll help the story a lot.


If you want, you can read the pages I had removed from after this point. This is the first page of the set of pages that was originally removed, although it and a few pages after it were reworked into the main story. The rest of the removed pages start here.

Sleep. For next comic, I’m gonna switch over to a new scene.

Well, he…

Tuesday, October 10th, 2006

Yes, Navy likes to rant.

Oh BTW, I changed the previous comic around, mostly just to flow with this comic a bit better.