This is another story arc which was salvaged for the mainline Moose River story; there it begins in Chapter 2 on page 40. I know I’ve mentioned this already but just take a look at how the pacing differs between Moose River Regular and its update in the main series. But also compare it with the updated page(s) and where I placed the “punchline”; here I was obligated to put one in frame six, while the other appeared in frame two of page 41 instead. Because of that simple change, it totally affected the pacing of story.

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